对旅游英语的看法

One possible version:

Dear John,

I’m glad to hear that you are going to travel. Now I’d like to share my view on travelling with you.

In my opinion, travelling is a very good activity. When you get tired with your work or study and when you have free time, you can go out to enjoy the beauty of nature. You can breathe the fresh air, meet different people and make friends with them. Only by relaxing yourself will you forget your tiredness and build your health.

In order to have a pleasant journey, you need to make full preparations ahead of time. You’d better have clear information about the weather, and bring proper clothes, a camera, some medicine for common injuries and diseases and so on. On your journey, you must pay attention to what you eat. Be careful with everything everywhere in case your money gets stolen.

Do you agree with me? Wish you a good journey.

Yours，

Li Hua

试题分析：考查提纲类短文写作。本文的写作话题是对旅游的看法和旅行时的注意事项。要点在文字提示中已经给出，建议考生从对旅游的看法何旅行的注意事项两方面着手。本文使用一般现在时进行陈述，并根据文字提示组织好要点的顺序，选择合适的词汇和句型，准确表达.写作时注意准确运用连接词，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。